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Cover Reveal for SIGNS OF ATTRACTION   Leave a comment


Coming June 14, 2016 from Avon Impulse


Do you know what hearing loss sounds like? I do.

All my life I’ve tried to be like you. I’ve failed.

So I keep it hidden.

But on the day my world crashed down around me, Reed was there.

He showed me just how loud and vibrant silence can be, even when I struggled to understand.

He’s unlike anyone I’ve ever known. His soulful eyes and strong hands pulled me in before I knew what was happening.

And as I saw those hands sign, felt them sparking on me, I knew: imperfect could be perfect.

Reed makes me feel things I’ve never felt. It’s exciting…and terrifying.

Because he sees me like no one else has, and I’m afraid of what he’ll find if he looks too closely.

The only thing that scares me more than being with him? Letting him go.

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About the Author

Laura Brown lives in Massachusetts with her quirky abnormal family. Her husband’s put up with her since high school, her young son keeps her on her toes, and her three cats think they deserve more scratches. Hearing loss is a big part of who she is, from her own Hard of Hearing ears, to the characters she creates.


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Monday Musings   Leave a comment

In case you’re interested, I put up a new page with my fanfiction stories in it. Right now it’s only one, THORNFIELD MANOR: JANE EYRE AND VAMPIRES.

I like writing fan fic and may do more. I also like doing retellings as evidenced by my current novel I’m querying with agents, IN DARKNESS WE DWELL which is a young adult Frankenstein retelling with Jack the Ripper elements and has a female main character.

Thornfield Manor Cover

I have done two retellings of Little Red Riding Hood, one is a short story on Kindle called, LITTLE RED  and one I just finished writing and editing called, BLOOD RED. In this one the wolves are persecuted by the humans. It’s a YA fantasy.

I’ve also written a young adult retelLITTLE RED COVERling of The Phantom of the Opera that features a male aspiring opera singer and a female opera ghost who possesses him. That one is MUSIC OF THE NIGHT. I’ve recently revised it and aged it down from a New Adult age to Young Adult. I will be querying it soon.

My WIP is a young adult fantasy retelling of Romeo and Juliet also a fantasy.

And, of course, there’s my zombie short story on Wattpad, a retelling of Grimm’s fairytale, The Robber Bridgegroom. Mine is THE ZOMBIE BRIDEGROOM and you can find it here:


What are your favorite fairytales or retellings?


The Writing Process: LET’S START AT THE BEGINNING!   Leave a comment

So far I’ve talked about getting ideas, plotting or pantsing and let’s say you’re ready to start writing. You’ve pantsed your way here or plotted until you can’t plot anymore. You type or write: Chapter 1. What’s next?

What you need is a great hook. A first line that will blow your readers/agents/editors out of the water! Most agents will read your first page but if it’s not stellar they won’t read further. What do you need for a great hook/first page?

You need stakes. No, not the pointy ones Buffy uses or the ones you eat. The first page needs to set up a couple of things. It needs to let the readers know your setting/time period. Writing a contemporary adult romance is completely different than writing a young adult science fiction. If you’re writing historical the setting might be easier but if you’re writing a science fiction novel you better mention space, aliens or spaceships (or whatever) in the first page. A horror will not read the same as a fantasy.

Okay, setting/time period, what else do you need? You need to either foreshadow the main character’s conflict or state it. Readers need to know what’s at stake for your main character right away. And don’t forget VOICE. The first page should sing (well, not really sing) with your main character’s voice. You also need some sort of inciting event. Why now? What’s happening to your main character? Avoid backstory or information dumping. Put your main character into the story and show us what’s going on.

Here’s what you need:

A great first line/hook

Mention of main character in first page

Setting/time period to set the tone of the rest of the book

Inciting event-what happened and what’s your character’s motivation?



Here’s an example from one of my books (you knew I’d pick one of mine, didn’t you?). This is the first page of my YA book, WITCH HUNTER

Chapter 1

Molly O’Claire’s foot half skimmed the gravel before the car had stopped. “Here! Stop the car!”

The Atlantic Ocean in all its glory stretched out for miles in all directions. Foam tipped waves washed up onto sun-drenched sand and washed out again to leave imprints of bubbles behind. Blue skies interlaced with cirrus clouds spoke of fair weather in the days ahead. Molly sighed with the sheer beauty of it. She kicked off her shoes and waded into the cold water.

“Isn’t it beautiful, mom?” Molly’s red hair blew wildly about her face. She held it back with one hand as she laughed.

“Come on Molly, Sarah is waiting for us.” Her mom waited impatiently by the jeep.

Molly waved to show she heard her then smiled as she spotted a starfish on the beach. She picked it up and tossed it back in the water.

“Come on, let’s go.” Molly retrieved her shoes from where she had thrown them and walked barefoot up the slight hill to the Jeep. She brushed her sandy feet off before she climbed back into the passenger side.

“That was awesome, “she said as she buckled her seat belt. “I love the ocean. I hope you get the job so we can live on the beach. Maybe I can find a part-time job too, you know babysitting or working in a store.”

“I hope I get it too. I want us to be closer to Sarah, and you know how I feel about you working when you are in school.”

“I know. School is my job right now,” she grinned at her mom. “Hey, can I practice driving?”

“No, not right now. You don’t know these roads.”

“Neither do you,” Molly said under her breath. Her mom glared at her. Molly smiled back. “We haven’t seen Aunt Sarah since she moved back to Salem two years ago,” she said as her mom pulled off the shoulder and back onto the road.

“I do miss her even though I don’t always agree with her choices.”

Now let’s see if it meets all the criteria.

Hook: We can see Molly is excited about something and we are interested to know what.

Mention of Main Character: Yes, first line mentions her.

Setting/Time Period/Tone: It appears to be contemporary and present day.

Inciting Event: It sounds like Molly’s mother is going on a job interview and Molly is staying with her Aunt Sarah in Salem. We’re not sure what’s going to happen but we’re intrigued.

Motivation of Main Character: Since we haven’t gotten the conflict yet (although we know it’s coming) we aren’t sure of her motivation yet.

Conflict/Stakes: We’re not sure but it must have something to do with the visit to Aunt Sarah.

Voice: Yes, the voice of the main character comes through.

So, did it work? Most of it. In retrospect, stating the conflict sooner might’ve been helpful.

I didn’t talk about point-of-view and that’s another post

Tell me how you feel about the beginning of your story in the comments!

Now go forth and write your killer first page!

Posted June 4, 2015 by kathleea in Uncategorized

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Cover Reveal for Library Jumpers!   Leave a comment


Our fearless writing contest leader, Brenda Drake has a book coming out in January and I’m one of the lucky bloggers who gets a sneak peek at the cover and I thought I’d share with all of you! Isn’t it gorgeous???

Library Jumpers

by Brenda DrakeLibrary Jumpers Cover

Release Date: 01/05/16

Entangled Teen

Summary from Goodreads:

Gia Kearns would rather fight with boys than kiss them. That is, until Arik, a leather clad hottie in the Boston Athenaeum, suddenly disappears. While examining the book of world libraries he abandoned, Gia unwittingly speaks the key that sucks her and her friends into a photograph and transports them into a Paris library, where Arik and his Sentinels—magical knights charged with protecting humans from the creatures traveling across the gateway books—rescue them from a demonic hound. 

Jumping into some of the world’s most beautiful libraries would be a dream come true for Gia, if she weren’t busy resisting her heart or dodging an exiled wizard seeking revenge on both the Mystik and human worlds. Add a French flirt obsessed with Arik and a fling with a young wizard, and Gia must choose between her heart and her head, between Arik’s world and her own, before both are destroyed.


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About the Author

Brenda Drake, the youngest of three children, grew up an Air Force brat and the continual new kid at school until her family settled in Albuquerque, New Mexico. Brenda’s fondest memories growing up is of her eccentric, Irish grandmother’s animated tales, which gave her a strong love for storytelling. So it was only fitting that she would choose to write young adult and middle grade novels with a bend toward the fantastical.

When Brenda’s not writing or doing the social media thing, she’s haunting libraries, bookstores,and coffee shops or reading someplace quiet and not at all exotic (much to her disappointment).


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